SilentGun Posted February 3, 2023 Posted February 3, 2023 (edited) Hey everyone! this is my second cinematic video that I want to turn into a Miniseries. I would love your feedback to see where I can improve! Edited February 3, 2023 by SilentGun 1 Link to my Imgur screenshots and motto http://imgur.com/a/Gt7dF One day in DCS... Vipers will fly along side Tomcats... Bugs with Superbugs, Tiffy's with Tornado's, Fulcrums with Flankers and Mirage with Rafales... :)The Future of DCS is a bright one:)
Hobo 1-1 Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023 Excellent, sweeping, grand and beautiful shots. Really great stuff. The one thing I would offer purely in the interest of providing what you asked for is to make sure each shot has a place in the overall story. I got the just of what was happening, but rather than each shot telling a story it seemed like, although empirically beautiful, each was separate and not necessarily related to anything else. Please take my suggestion with a huge grain of salt: I couldn’t produce anything like this. Well done!
SilentGun Posted February 4, 2023 Author Posted February 4, 2023 Excellent, sweeping, grand and beautiful shots. Really great stuff. The one thing I would offer purely in the interest of providing what you asked for is to make sure each shot has a place in the overall story. I got the just of what was happening, but rather than each shot telling a story it seemed like, although empirically beautiful, each was separate and not necessarily related to anything else. Please take my suggestion with a huge grain of salt: I couldn’t produce anything like this. Well done! Thanks for the feedback! I’ll make sure to have each shot flow a little better in the next one. Link to my Imgur screenshots and motto http://imgur.com/a/Gt7dF One day in DCS... Vipers will fly along side Tomcats... Bugs with Superbugs, Tiffy's with Tornado's, Fulcrums with Flankers and Mirage with Rafales... :)The Future of DCS is a bright one:)
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