yuhan11020 Posted June 28, 2010 Posted June 28, 2010 (edited) (About airplane is always interested for me ) (Now I need to learn more about it, because the way you used it showed in the video I never try.) is there some problems with the two sentences! help me !!!!! "the way " means they use the catia file to create planes in X-plane 9,which showed in the video!! maybe who come from USA can give me somehelp about my article(around 600 words)! http://cid-74fb2dfa02b7ff2c.spaces.live.com/default.aspx I will mail it to a professor! give me some suggestion!!!thank you a lot !!! Edited June 28, 2010 by yuhan11020
GGTharos Posted June 28, 2010 Posted June 28, 2010 ... What? [sIGPIC][/sIGPIC] Reminder: SAM = Speed Bump :D I used to play flight sims like you, but then I took a slammer to the knee - Yoda
yuhan11020 Posted June 28, 2010 Author Posted June 28, 2010 ... What? my english is not good !can you understand the two sentences!! is it ok!!
yuhan11020 Posted June 28, 2010 Author Posted June 28, 2010 ... What?(About airplane is always interested for me ) (Now I need to learn more about it, because the way you used it showed in the video I never try.)
Lucas_From_Hell Posted June 28, 2010 Posted June 28, 2010 What's the subject, anyway? Well, I think I can make sense of it. Airplanes have always interested you, and you need to learn more about it, but I'm afraid I didn't get the video part at all...
EtherealN Posted June 28, 2010 Posted June 28, 2010 Let's see if I understand you right: you have always been interested in airplanes, and now you want to learn more about them? But which video and who made the video and which airplane? [sIGPIC][/sIGPIC] Daniel "EtherealN" Agorander | Даниэль "эфирныйн" Агорандер Intel i7 2600K @ 4.4GHz, ASUS Sabertooth P67, 8GB Corsair Vengeance @ 1600MHz, ASUS GTX 560Ti DirectCU II 1GB, Samsung 830series 512GB SSD, Corsair AX850w, two BENQ screens and TM HOTAS Warthog DCS: A-10C Warthog FAQ | DCS: P-51D FAQ | Remember to read the Forum Rules | | | Life of a Game Tester
GGTharos Posted June 28, 2010 Posted June 28, 2010 You need to make it more clear what it is you want information on. All you've said so far is 'I like planes'. [sIGPIC][/sIGPIC] Reminder: SAM = Speed Bump :D I used to play flight sims like you, but then I took a slammer to the knee - Yoda
RIPTIDE Posted June 28, 2010 Posted June 28, 2010 (edited) (About airplane is always interested for me ) (Now I need to learn more about it, because the way you used it showed in the video I never try.) is there some problems with the two sentences! help me !!!!! maybe who come from USA can give me somehelp about my article(around 600 words)! So you're writing an article of 600 words. And the videos you saw made the plane seem awesome.. whatever video that was... but anyway. And now you want some Yankee types to talk to you more about said plane. So I presume this is a Yankee plane like A-10 or F-15? Ya? Edited June 28, 2010 by RIPTIDE [sIGPIC][/sIGPIC]
yuhan11020 Posted June 28, 2010 Author Posted June 28, 2010 What's the subject, anyway? Well, I think I can make sense of it. Airplanes have always interested you, and you need to learn more about it, but I'm afraid I didn't get the video part at all... http://cid-74fb2dfa02b7ff2c.spaces.live.com/default.aspx
yuhan11020 Posted June 28, 2010 Author Posted June 28, 2010 (edited) So you're writing an article of 600 words. And the videos you saw made the plane seem awesome.. whatever video that was... but anyway. And now you want some Yankee types to talk to you more about said plane. So I presume this is a Yankee plane like A-10 or F-15? Ya? http://cid-74fb2dfa02b7ff2c.spaces.live.com/default.aspx Edited June 28, 2010 by yuhan11020
Lucas_From_Hell Posted June 28, 2010 Posted June 28, 2010 Ah, that makes sense now. My English isn't exactly perfect, but I can try to help you on that. Maybe some of the native folks can do a sharper correction :) I'm doing it just judging by my very basic grammar knowledge and some stuff here or there that make the text easier to read, at least for me. I hope it helps. All in all, I just want to mention I replaced "aircraft" by "aviation" when it seemed more suitable in some occasions. Also, I cleared a few things that confused me here and there, that's pretty much it. Some parts were too confusing and forced me to guess, so it might be horribly wrong. I hope some of the native-speakers show up and give a more qualified help on that :smilewink: Is it good enough? "Dear XXXXX, Hello. How are you? It's really a privilege to study in your class, and it helps me a lot. You have shown us a video about the XXXXX Aircraft. It is a very beautiful aircraft and has very advanced aerodynamics, I'm very interested in it. About aviation, it has always interested me. When I was young, I was very good at drawing, and always got the first place in competitions. So everybody just said I would be a very good artist. In senior high school, I became very interested in military aircraft, and some of my classmates had the same interests too, maybe because we are really men*. So every weekend we spent a lot of time searching for some news about Chinese aircraft in magazines in a bookstore, and compared our planes with American aircraft. We always spent a lot of time there reading books but never bought anything, what made the shop keeper very unhappy. But that was a good time for us, and at that time I've obtained a lot of basic knowledge about aircraft. At last I gave up the thoughts of becoming an artist, to study about aviation. I graduated at the Nanchang Hangkong University (Nanchang University of Aeronautics), majoring in Aerospace Engineering. When I was in college, I liked to play flight simulators on my computer. It really costs much money for a computer that runs them, but I learned a lot from it. X-Plane 9, Flight Simulator X, DCS: Blackshark and Falcon 4.7 - they are all very good. Some of them have many kinds of airplanes, and they are very realistic. I always tried to introduce people to these simulators, but they all said it's too complicated. Now I need to learn more about it, because I've never tried it the way you have shown in the video. I am also fond of flying RC airplane models, and I've made some kind of airplane models by myself. Some of them flied well, but some crashed. I think my flight skill is good, though. I have a T-Rex 450 clone helicopter, and I can fly it upside down. Once I participated in an innovation competition of my college, and I made a very small flapping-wing UAV. It was weighted less than 10g, with a wingspan of around twenty centimeters. It looked like a big butterfly. Because of its light weight, the stability was a bit unacceptable, and it can't be controlled. The teacher liked it, however, so I got the first place. The following year I found that a student did a flapping-wing aircraft too, much bigger and faster than mine, and it could be controlled. It was really a good job. At that time we communicated a lot. Now at work, we are designing an amphibian aircraft, which will be the largest of its kind in the world. I am in the general arrangement department and currently am responsible for the Environmental Control System layout. Throughout this job I've learnt a lot about this system, and other systems as well. I also stayed in the factory as an intern for some time and learnt the manufacturing and assembly technologies and processes. I've enclosed my college courses and the scores in the attached Excel file for your reference. I am not sure if I am qualified for your University, as you have your own requirements. One thing I forget to tell you is that there is another place in China you really don't want to miss. Here is a website for an introduction: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Huangshan_Mountains It's not far from my home. I hope to meet you in China soon. Best Regards, Han"
yuhan11020 Posted June 29, 2010 Author Posted June 29, 2010 thank you very much!! you really made it batter !
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