awsome ! I realy like the zoom effect. I have to say that I agree with whats been said earlier also that the wobble is a nice touch but its a bit much that it is beeing constant. Maybe 2-3 wobbles would be enough? I dont think you should eliminate it all together.
I also like the delay on the sound, altough i feel that its too long of a delay, ( the camera is not that far away, so the sound wouldt take that long to reach it.) you should deffently keep the delay, just make it shorter .
Overall this is the best camera work I've seen you do mate, I watched it 5-6 times in a row ;) awsome!
cant wait to see the rest!