Well, I think the start is good, but I was hoping for more action, I thought with all that dramatic music there must come some kind of combat, but no. I think if you are going to record the A-10Cs just flying around they have to maneuver in some way. Not just flying in a circle and then land. A 9 minutes long movie with nothing but good music is too much.
If there were an audience they would think that it was a boring air show.
I know it's your first movie. Just keep practicing I think it could turn out quite well :)