I have a couple more:
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2. OXYGEN SUPPLY: "be" formatted differently (2x)
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2x "100% O₂" (-> closing quotation marks are wrong height)
The red background switch "EMER" has (-> "has" is formatted differently) two positions: "OFF' (' -> ")
The valve is mechanically controlled and operated from either cockpits (-> cockpit) by a lever "FUEL SHUT-OFF VALVE".
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The radio has not a provision to select individual frequency ...
-> The radio does not have a provision to select individual frequencies ...
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..., when switched to the "ADF" position, enables to listen (-> insert "to") the ADF beacon signal in the pilot's headset.
When the helmet visor became (-> becomes) fogged during flight, ...
In case of sudden visor fogging, the (-> different formatting) ''QUICK" ...
... push-button should be depressed and hold (-> held), ...
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Temperature Knob: Turning the knob, the current utilized by (-> insert "the") visor beating (-> heating) system is increased or decreased.
3. Helmet Visor Heating Switch
4. Quick Heating Button
5. Temperature Controller
-> looks like 4. and 5. are swapped
... to the forward position (-> insert comma) the parking brakes are set ...
The instrument lighting switch has three position (-> positions):
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To reset the recording pointers to the normal I (-> 1) "g" position, ...
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... while theTAS (-> "the TAS") pointer indicates airspeed from 300 to 1,200 km/h.
... and the long outer pointer indicates increments of I00 (-> 100) meters and ...
CHECK INDICATION SET DANGEROUS HIGHT (-> HEIGHT)
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The turn indicator is a gyro instrument which provides a quantitative display of the rate of tum (-> turn) being performed.
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ADF CONTROL BOX - Descriptions for items 5. - 9. missing
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Pressure in emergency circuit after engine start 150kp/cm² (-> 150 kp/cm²)
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While the "J.P.T 730°C"light (-> "J.P.T 730°C" light) comes on during flight, ...
... will cause the "J.P.T. 700"C" (-> "J.P.T. 700°C") light comes (-> to come) on and in position II the "J.P.T 730"C" (-> "J.P.T. 700°C") light comes (-> to come) on.
The switch "EMERG" should be switched on whenever an (-> remove "an") emergency conditions are detected.
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If the boost pump fails to operate and DON'T START light does not go off within 5 seconds (-> insert comma) do not start the engine.
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If any of the following condition (-> conditions) is not met, abort start sequence by retarding the throttle to STOP.
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... pressure to 1.52-1.59 kplcm2 (-> kp/cm²) (22-23 psi) ...
... which is adequate for canopysealing (-> canopy sealing).
As the generator connects to the power supply (-> insert comma) the "GENERATOR" warning light (-> lights) extinguish in both cockpits.
The voltammeter then indicates the generator output voltage 28.5 V and currency (-> current) actually provided by the generator to the power supply.
..., the generator is automatically disconnected from the power supply and the "GENERATOR" warining (-> warning) light comes on.
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Should an icing sensor is not in the air stream on the ground, it does not indicate icing conditions. (<- sentence does not make sense to me)
... panel and the two shut-off valves are (-> two spaces, remove one) protected by ...
... "DE-ICING AIR SHOWER" C/B located on the aft (-> remove line break)
CB/switch panel.
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9. AIR DIFFUSOR (-> DIFFUSER)