Hi,
A few words, only personal opinion, and to give you feedback on a movie already quite attractive and dynamic.
Your formation flying shots with many aircraft are very good, the views from the ground as well.
On the other hand, the accelerated rythm does not feel right.
And you should play more with the zoom: there is a lot of wide angle shots which do not give justice to the beautiful hornet.
Hope this helps a bit, and I’m looking forward to more videos from you,
Congratulations for this auspicious start!