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  1. Please let us know if you find any errors that are not already listed in this thread. Thank you!
  2. See ticket #26890: whole document: "EZ 42" vs "EZ42" gunsight p. 2: ... to all fans of DCS(-> insert ":") P-51D Mustang. p. 9: (-> Remove space) While originally intended to serve as a bomber interceptor p. 12: ... 13mm Rheinemetall-Borsig (-> Rheinmetall-Borsig) MG 131 p. 16: ... had more in common with the Malclom (-> Malcolm) Hood ... p. 16: The Fw 190D-9 (-> "Fw 190 D-9" to match the rest of the document) has an all-metal ... p. 16: The rear spar consists of two section (-> sections), ... p. 17: The Fw 190D-9 (-> "Fw 190 D-9" to match the rest of the document) has an all-metal tail unit p. 18: ... surfaces that include a vertical stabilizer, rudder, horizontal stabilizer, two elevator (-> elevators), two aileron (-> ailerons), and flaps. p. 22: ... the corresponding Ein button and ... -> ... the corresponding "Ein" (On) button and ... p. 22: ... the corresponding Aus button and ... -> ... the corresponding "Aus" (Off) button and ... p. 24: ... is powered by a Junkers Jumo 213A-1 (-> "213 A-1")engine p. 24: The Junkers Jumo 213 engine comes equipped with a "Bediengerät" Engine Control Unit. It is similar in function to the "Kommandogerät" command device used on -> Engine Control Unit -> engine control unit -> put "engine control unit" and "command device" between parentheses p. 26: ... in an (-> "the") event of an emergency. p. 27: The Junkers Jumo 213A-1 (-> "213 A-1") engine drives ... p. 29: ... normal pressure of 1 to 2 kg/cm3 (-> cm³). p. 29: Front and rear fuselage tanks fed (-> "feed") into the engine’s main pump. p. 30: (-> Insert "A") Fuel Pressure gauge is also provided that ... p. 31: ... to feed in to (-> "into") the rear tank. p. 32: A 55-liyters (-> "55-liter") circular oil tank is located ... p. 32: ... temperature range of 110…130 Celsius degrees (-> "degrees Celsius"). p. 34: The coolant system attempts to operate at the temperatures about 100 C at all altitudes. -> ... at a temperature of about 100°C at all altitudes. p. 34: ... is exceeded (-> insert comma) the pressure begins to rise. p. 35: To avoid excessive pressure (-> insert comma) the cooling system has a ... p. 36: Lightning -> Lighting p. 36: Instrument Panel Lightning (-> Lighting) p. 39: The aircraft if (-> is) equipped with a FuG 16ZY radio, ... p. 39: The AFN2 (-> "AFN-2" to match the rest of the document) component of the radio set ... p. 39: ... is one of the world’s first Identification Friend or Foe (IFF) unit (-> units) that ... p. 39: ... a pre-defined signal that the ground station can processs (-> process) ... p. 41: The Fw 190D-9 (-> "Fw 190 D-9" to match the rest of the document) offers ... p. 42: ... twin synchronized 13mm Rheinemetall-Borsig (-> Rheinmetall-Borsig) MG 131 machine guns ... p. 42: ... is from the SZKK (Schalt- Zähl- und Kontrollkasten) family ... -> ... (Schalt-, Zähl- und Kontrollkasten) ... p. 43: A total of 803 EZ42 was produced in total, production ceasing in March of 1945. -> avoid repetition of "total" p. 45: The cockpit in the FW 190D-9 (-> "Fw 190 D-9" to match the rest of the document) was ... p. 46: The front dash that includes the instrument panel and the EZ 42 gunsight. -> Not a sentence. Maybe remove "that". p. 48: Remove the "." at the end of 15., 16. and 17. All other items (1-14) do not have full stops either. p. 48: The left-hand side that includes engine controls. -> Not a sentence. Maybe remove "that". p. 49: Remove all the "." at the end (17x) p. 50: The right-hand side that includes electrical system breakers, canopy and weapon controls, flight clock. -> Not a sentence. Maybe remove "that". p. 50 1 -> 1. 2 -> 2. ... 7 -> 7. Remove all the "." at the end (7x) p. 52: The Throttle lever incorporates (-> insert "a") twist grip. p. 55: The AFN2 (-> "AFN-2" to match the rest of the document) indicator allows for easy navigation ... p. 57: ... changes position according to the direction of he (-> the) force of gravity ... p. 57: The outer rotary ring intended for Cage/Uncage Artificial Horizon. "Fest" is cage and "Los" is uncaging position. -> The outer rotary ring is intended for caging/uncaging the Artificial Horizon. "Fest" is caged and "Los" is uncaged position. p. 59: The gauge is graduated from 0.6 (-> 0.5) to 2.5 atmospheres absolute. p. 61: The instrument is graduated from 0 to 3500 (-> 3600) and ... p. 61: ... is used to set power in the Fw 190D-9 (-> "Fw 190 D-9" to match the rest of the document). p. 64: "Flugellast" -> "Flügellast" p. 64: "Rumpflast" - (-> change dash to a long dash to match line above) Jettison Fuselage Stores. p. 65: cm2 -> cm² (10x) p. 65: ... is graduated from - (-> remove the "-") 0° to 130°C. p. 65: Two indicator strips indicate normal operating temperature of 70…120°C. -> Indicator strips cannot be seen in figure 59 p. 66: ... and is graduated from - (-> remove the "-") 0° to 130°C. p. 66: Two indicator strips indicate normal operating temperature of 110…130°C. -> Indicator strips cannot be seen in figure 60 p. 66: ... indicates mixture pressure in the MW-50 system in in (-> remove one "in") kg/cm2. p. 66: One main fuel gauge (-> insert "is") provided for all tanks. p. 67: One main fuel gauge (-> insert "is") provided for all tanks. p. 68: When the aft tank will be indicate the fuel consumption therefore external tank is empty and can be jettison. -> Sentence does not make sense and needs to be rewritten. p. 68: The instrument is graduated from 0 to 250 kg/cm2(-> insert space here)and scaled to 10 kg/cm2. p. 69: The Oxygen Flown (-> Flow) Valve is used to turn (-> insert "on") the flow of oxygen to the pilot. p. 75 The two available positions are "Kopflastig" (Up) and "Schwanzlastig" (Down). -> The two available positions are "Kopflastig" (nose-heavy, up position) and "Schwanzlastig" (tail-heavy, down position). p. 76 The two available positions are "Ein" (Up) and "Aus" (Down). -> The two available positions are "Ein" (on, up position) and "Aus" (off, down position). p. 77 Remove all four "." in the enumeration. p. 78: The Communications - Homing Switch can be set to one of two positions, "FT" (-> "Ft") or "Abst". p. 78: Listen to PR16 -> What is PR16? Explain... p. 78 Because on the first (I) frequency selector position a sending and receiving are conducted at different frequencies in simulator it isn't used. -> Because on the first frequency selector position (I) sending and receiving are conducted at different frequencies, it is not used in this simulation. p. 79 The "Junghans BoUk-1" was ... -> The "Junghans Borduhr Bo-UK1" was ... p. 79: ... for all German aircrafts (-> aircraft) in WWII. p. 79 ... round Wind/Set Knob below. (-> Two spaces between the words, remove one) The button under ... p. 79 The button under it starts the stopwatch, arrest (-> arrests) it and put (-> puts) it back. p. 79 The stopwatch mechanism was (-> is) started and stopped by pressing the start-stop (-> stopwatch) button, located below the wind/set knob. p. 79 Each passing of the sweep second was (-> is) recorded, up to 15 minutes, on the small register dial. p. 80 Each circuit breaker has two buttons. Larger black button with a white dot switches the corresponding circuit on. Red button opens the circuit and switches it off. -> Each circuit breaker has two buttons: A larger black button with a white dot that switches the corresponding circuit on - and a red button that opens the circuit and switches it off. p. 81: The circuit backer (-> breaker) name ... p. 83: ... to execute a (-> an) engine start. p. 85: As soon as you enter the cockpit, make sure next: -> As soon as you enter the cockpit, ... p. 85: Turn on all circuit breakers on forward circuit breakers (-> breaker) panel: p. 85: Ignition (Magneto) Selector Switch to M 1+2 (-> "M1+2") position. p. 86: Fuel Tank Selector Lever in Open (Auf) position (full up). -> Fuel Tank Selector Lever in "auf" (open, full up) position. p. 86: Switch on Fuel (-> fuel) pumps with additional circuit breakers (-> breaker) panel: p. 87: Press starter switch about 15…20 second (-> seconds) to flywheel spin-up. p. 87: After flywheel spin-up to (-> remove "to") pull up starter switch for engine start. p. 92: When a drop tanks (-> tank) is attached, ... p. 92: Whole "Fuel Management" section should be updated with more info and whole sentences. p. 100 Because the SCR-522A (-> FuG 16; copy/paste error from P-51D?) VHF AM radio of the FW 190D (-> "Fw 190 D-9" to match the rest of the document) is limited to 5 (-> 4) channels, you will only be able to communicate with those entities whose frequencies are loaded in your radio. p. 100: When Easy Communications mode (-> insert "is") enabled, the following ‘quick’ command shortcuts are also available: p. 101: The PPT (-> PTT) button opens and closes the radio communications window for currently selected radio. p. 101: Hot keys (-> Hotkeys) will also be available ... p. 113: Because the FuG16 (-> FuG 16) AM radio ...
  3. http://www.digitalcombatsimulator.com/en/personal/backer/ This link doesn't work?
  4. Thanks for the update! :thumbup: Lots of good stuff coming to DCS in the future.
  5. Congratulations, Mustang! You deserve it!
  6. Hi backers!
  7. Taco? Taco Bell is great - I also want it here in Germany!
  8. Very good video! Thanks
  9. WTF?
  10. This is both great and creepy at the same time.
  11. Nice! Thanks!
  12. Good news, thanks!
  13. Wow, this is impressive!
  14. Thank you, Chris! Your contact with the community is exceptional :thumbup:
  15. Happy Birthday!
  16. Merry Christmas!
  17. Do I spot another "RETARN"? :D
  18. I like it very much...
  19. Happy birthday, cichlidfan! :beer::cheer3nc:
  20. Great progress! :thumbup:
  21. Thanks for the update! Keep up the good work! :thumbup:
  22. Just AWESOME! :thumbup:
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